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Persistence part 1 by ~mastertortilla27:iconmastertortilla27:



                                                          PERSISTENCE


Aang and the gang are camping eating dinner, somewhere in the Earth Kingdom.

Toph’s  POV
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*We were camping somewhere and frankly I didn’t care where it was. I was too busy between listening to Aang and katara and eating to really care.
And there was something unusual about Sokka too he wasn’t  talking. AT ALL!
I know Sokka and he Never stops talking. Frankly I thought the silence was kind of creepy.
So, I decided to ask him why he was being so quiet.*
Um…Sokka?
Huh?
I was just wondering why are you being so quiet? I mean you’re never quiet and I mean NEVER.
Oh.. I’m just  thinking.
About what?
It’s nothing.
Sokka I can tell you’re lying just tell me what’s wrong.
*Sigh…*ok. I was thinking about Suki.
Oh…..*Why does it have to be about her!*
It’s just I miss her.
Oh…you love her don’t you?*well, so much for me getting Sokka.*
I used to think I did, but now I know that I just like her as a friend.
REALLY?*I probably shouldn’t have yelled so loud but I really don’t care right now*
Um… ya really.
Did you ever like her?
To tell you the truth I don’t think so, I mean I’ve only spent like three days with her over all.
Really? I mean I’ve only met her once. But you’ve only seen her three days?
Ya, I really have only seen her a couple of days.
You know. It seems like you’ve got something else on your mind, are you sure that’s all?*even if you don’t I’m just happy you told me that!*
Well, sort of but I kind of don’t want to talk about it.
Oh come on, just tell me!
Ugh..fine I’ll tell you, I kind of like this girl and I don’t know if she likes me back.
Oh..*Crap,he is making it REALLY hard for me.* so do I know this “girl”?
Um..you could say that.
Have I ever met her?
Uh..well.. Sort of.                                                                        
Ok..*Urgh,why isn’t he telling me?*
©2008-2009 ~mastertortilla27
:iconmastertortilla27:

Author's Comments

This is my fist fanfic.I just had this idea and wanted to write and I had a lot of free time.Anyways I would appreciate advice also.




I don't own A:TLA

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:iconhsminnie333:
I think it's fairly good. I just think you need to use qoates when you have them talk.

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What makes a bad hazardous person? IF I WAS A GOOD HAZARD THEN I WOULD NOT BE SITTING HERE DISCUSSING THIS WITH YOU NOW WOULD I!? WELL THEN COME ON YOU SISSY LITTLE @#$%*!! OH MAN ARE THEY GOING TO HAVE A HARD TIME GLUEING YOU TOGETHER IN HELL @#$%^!!!!
:iconmastertortilla27:
ok thanks, I actually have 2 other parts but my internet cut out and couldn't submit them till now
I'll try the quotes too

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Fear the Tokka awesomeness!
If you don't it may kill you. And I'll probably help!:evillaugh:

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Vaila kai eepa! -Fremen from Emperor Battle for Dune.
:iconsun-tsu-toriden:
fairly easy to read. just need to put speech marks in and your set i think.

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Keeper of the Soul Dragons

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A Student of Martial Arts, of Love and of Life

"Darkness it not the absence of light, but the refusal to see. If we only open our eyes, we will see that there is no darkness." ~ Quote by me

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